A poem: Earth Air Fire and Water

lilosophieDecember 15, 2013

I posted this on a challenge, where you have to write on a theme.
It was so appropriate because I just had been enduring this situation:
Second Week of December

Earth, hard and dry
Her children thirsty
All suffer

Cold wind blows
Ice rain covers land
Lays frozen blanket

Sun, fiery orb
Lights winter sky
Gently warming

Ice into water
Running downhill
making puddles

LiloD.

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anneliese_32(6)

Love it, so descriptive, especially the feeling behind it.

    Bookmark   December 16, 2013 at 6:26AM
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rob333

Hits all of my senses at one. A hallmark of good poetry. Nicely done.

    Bookmark   December 16, 2013 at 9:43AM
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west_gardener

You certainly met the challenge, lilo. Very nice.
Lol, first time I've heard of a poetry challenge.

    Bookmark   December 16, 2013 at 5:47PM
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mrobbins(6b - Brooklyn)

Lilo, that's a wonderful piece of writing. Thank you for writing it, and for sharing it with us.

    Bookmark   January 17, 2014 at 3:19PM
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lilosophie

Hello Mary, thank you and I am glad to "see" you

    Bookmark   January 17, 2014 at 7:35PM
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