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Quote 3-2-11

Posted by don_socal socal (My Page) on
Wed, Mar 2, 11 at 0:08

Day light

Begin the day
the waking dream
linear time
goes fast it seems

The morning starts
in a haze
then hurries on
becomes a blaze

Stay on track
accomplish much
projects, desires
things to touch

Make them better
improve the way
all that watch
have much to say

Give from self
to reach the goal
the waking dream
can now be whole

The linear time
reverses speed
energy spent
rest in need

Time to think
reflect, muse
of the day
how was used

Back to dreams
renew the mind
the ones that
make spirit kind.


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RE: Quote 3-2-11

Heavy stuff there Don. Steve in Baltimore County.


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RE: Quote 3-2-11

I'm assuming when you don't have the author of your poetry listed,you are the author. You sure have a lot of talent Don,and are a man of all seasons.There are so many GPers I'd love to meet and you are way way up on the list.


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RE: Quote 3-2-11

Wished I had your talent. Lovely.


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I am inspired! A good write to read at the crack of dawen, thanks!


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Don I loved this so much that when I read it I went to try writing a poem about the physical side of things, since you had encompassed the mental/spiritual side so well. Well I couldn't get the ending right and then forgot to post to you letting you know how much I enjoy your writing and find it inspirational to boot. Thanks for sharing.


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