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poem

Posted by don_socal socal (My Page) on
Wed, May 25, 11 at 19:59

Effort

The push to action
to conquer distraction
waits in the background
thoughts of the mind

The energy summoned
is slow in coming
to create a tangible
sentence defined

Life in slow motion
gives credence the notion
to beauty of words
and the will to be kind

Desires are fleeting
each one a chance meeting
to grasp and enjoy
till it starts to unwind

Engage in exchanges
of ideas in stages
built from the depths
where a spark you will find

Don


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Don, that is so beautiful, wistful.
It is sweet and sad.

This garden of words is honored
to have you growing here.


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Beautiful


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  • Posted by lilod NoCal/8 (My Page) on
    Thu, May 26, 11 at 14:59

I like it a lot, you express your thoughts so well, thank you


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Yes,you express your thoughts very well.


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I love it!


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I especially like this one, Don.Not only are the thoughts poignant,but the words just flow on the page. Very nice.


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