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Posted by don_socal socal (My Page) on
Sun, Jun 19, 11 at 22:35

The path

The mind's desire
to find the way
is directed by
the path it takes

To choose a course
to embrace ideals
direction makes all
dimensions real

Seeing the way
for each a choice
influenced by
past mind's voice

So the future
reflects the past
till perception
reveals the path

Narrow, twisted
hither an yon
up and down
and then beyond

To the edges
of limits
that are
not really there

no borders
there be

Inner freedom
for you
and for me


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RE: Poem

  • Posted by lilod NoCal/8 (My Page) on
    Mon, Jun 20, 11 at 9:27

Thank you, Don, reminding me that inner freedom is always possible, no matter what circumstances dictate outwardly. Just got to keep weeding the Path.

RE: Poem

Great one! As always Don. Terrific.

RE: Poem

Keep your poems coming. Love it.

RE: Poem

Thanks Don. This is a terrific poem.
I agree with lilod about the inner freedom.It is so peaceful.
I really like this part.

"To the edges
of limits
that are
not really there".
I guess we set our own limits.

I like the whole poem. I would like your permission to put the poem on my little bitty personal page that I have posted here in the GP.

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