Looks like you're doing a great job! Having a "suboptimal" green/brown balance will make the breaking down process take longer, but it won't make your compost substandard, so I wouldn't worry too much about that.

I think you might be able to transfer your compost-in-the-making quicker & easier with a garden fork rather than the edging spade you're using - at least, that's what I use and I get more stuff with each scoop.

As Carrie said, there is nothing wrong with having a high C:N ratio. Adding your kitchen trimmings will only help. IMO leaves are the best C materials bar none and there is no way you can have too many. If it's not going to rain, I might have sprayed a bit of water onto the leaves as you turned. They looked a bit dry and with the visible moisture escaping as you turned it might be an idea to add some. Other than that, it looks like you are enjoying yourself and that's a big plus in my book.

Lloyd